Sound Mixing
Foley- Brakes and Thumps, footsteps, Boot / doors closing
Recorded on phones - Create , Re- create it, sound effects, Online (youtube needs to be copyright free and suitable )
Garageband - make a sound, samples of orchard music, Find a track (got to be copy right free)
Sound mixing making sure we have the correct sound and right music! Look around find the right one.
Synching all of it!
Iesha, Alex, Lauren
ReplyDeleteAs the video has not been uploaded by the rough cut deadline for assessment I am unable to give you directed feedback or a grade beyond L1 for the video as it is incomplete.
However micro aspects you have done well:
Generally well framed shots and some variety of angles
Edit flows quite well
Good use of mise-en-scene with some attention to detail (L3)
location/costume/lighting/car
Narrative makes some sense (L3)
Clearly identifies the genre (L3)
Improvements
The footage is out of focus at times - try to cut down your sequence to make it flow faster and limit the amount of out of focus footage you have. (L2)
Too many zooms - cut these out where possible, looks amateurish and not filmlike (L2)
Title sequence missing (L1) - reshoot?
No soundtrack or foley (L1)
Reshoot OSS close up of the photo to help it make sense (MAYBE A FEATURE IN THE TITLES? (L2)
Colour correction try using blue to balance the lighting levels, it is a bit yellow in places because of reliance on street lighting - compensate) (L3)
Hit the final deadline (Fri 2nd March 5pm) (L1)